preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. 

 brilliant opening shot-music comes in perfectly to.

excellent continuity editing of the start. 

180 degree rule- advanced  technique but worth learning as you break this in the middle of the chase scene 

transition  swirl- was it for  a specific reason?

 a excellent  ending -but was a fantasy genre.


2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise. 

www: i used brilliant opening shots and  while editing i had a  lot of clips which allowed me to continue the continuity  and  the ending   was good.

EBI:  even though the ending was good I should clarify if it was fantasy and  if the transition    was worth it and to not  break  180 degree rule.



3) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List three things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be specific.

From  this  I have learned to take a lot of different clips from angles  and to take a shot list and write a script so it would be easy.

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